Why I love my horse
Your coat is soft and beautiful
Like a cotton shirt on a summer day.
Even though that’s what I say
That’s not why I love you.
You do all I ask of you without a second thought.
As much as you don’t like it
I appreciate it a lot.
But that’s not why I love you.
You love me unconditionally.
No matter what I do.
I can tell you what I want to say or do
And you won’t tell a soul.
You looked at me with those auburn eyes
And that’s when I knew to my surprise
That something so wild deep inside
Can be so sweet in good time.
You’ve taught me to love.
You’ve taught me to hate.
But all in all I cannot wait.
For this love for you burns so true
And this is why I love you.
Your coat is soft and beautiful
Like a cotton shirt on a summer day.
Even though that’s what I say
That’s not why I love you.
You do all I ask of you without a second thought.
As much as you don’t like it
I appreciate it a lot.
But that’s not why I love you.
You love me unconditionally.
No matter what I do.
I can tell you what I want to say or do
And you won’t tell a soul.
You looked at me with those auburn eyes
And that’s when I knew to my surprise
That something so wild deep inside
Can be so sweet in good time.
You’ve taught me to love.
You’ve taught me to hate.
But all in all I cannot wait.
For this love for you burns so true
And this is why I love you.
I like it poem so much. I wish i could write poems off the top of my head and make it sound cool. Your horse seems beautiful even though you didn't describe what it looks like i just had a picture is my mind. I like this piece a lot good job.
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That is exactly how i feel about the horses that used to be at my grandparents farm. They used to have so many until they decided to move and had to sell them all. The stupid thing is that they didn't have to sell them because they haven't sold the house yet. I miss my horse.....
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really good. I like how some lines you have rhyming words and in others you do not, and yet it still flows really nicely. It also makes me think of my Uncle's horse Smarty. He was so big yet gentle and calm.
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